Not your ordinary teenage mind

Not your ordinary teenage mind
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Saturday, April 4, 2009

Proposed cover for Bone Warriors


This is the cover they sent for "Bone Warriors." It may be eye-catching, but the characters look reversed. Dark-haired Derrik is supposed to be the leader, and reddish-haired Tweaks is the nerdy follower. That's not how it looks here, is it? The sword is supposed to be a snake man's sword, too, with a snake head on the handle and a wider blade. Maybe they'll fix it.
My original book cover idea was to have a pile of misshapen bones crawling out of a pit with colored smoke coming out of the eye sockets.
I like the back blurb, though.

7 comments:

Rachelle said...

This sounds really cool! I like the cover, too. Who is your publisher?

Jewel's Gems said...

Way cool cover! I'm excited to read the book. Congratulations:o)

Tristi Pinkston said...

Even if they switched them, I think the cover looks awesome. Although the crawling bones would be cool, too.

Laurie LC Lewis said...

Wow! That'a great cover and you're son is amazing! How proud are you?

And congrats on the new book! I'm sure you'll find a way! Orphaned series books need to get published!

Cindy Beck said...

Great cover! Although, I do agree that they have the two boys switched. And the name "Bron Bahlmann" looks really cool with the sword pointing down to it!

The bones would have been cool too, but I this cover looks really great and teenagers will love it.

Shirley Bahlmann said...

The publisher is Cedar Fort

Lucy Nilsen said...

Nice cover. I am intrigued! Very "Hollywood". Can't wait to read it. Are you drafting the sequel...